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I live very near Pa., but didn't now the detais of the flooding that took place. This was an interesting piece and an I enjoyed it. Watch out for the mixing of tenses ... it makes the read a bit confusing. Also, watch for sentence fragments. Correct those and you'll have a fine story!
05/14/07
My son has read and shared much about the Johnstown flood, so it was interesting to read about this. I was confused by the tense shifting around and it was hard to keep the two floods untangled, but it was cool to see how God spared him not just that one time. Thanks for sharing this. :-)
I lived not too far from there and have heard about it all my life. Good handling of it.
05/17/07
Since I live in the midwest, I was not very familiar with this disaster. I, too, had a little trouble with the tense, but found it very interesting reading. Thanks for sharing how God spared your father-in-laws life, not once, but several times. It reminds us all that God DOES have a plan for us, and He will see it through. Very encouraging.
God keeps his hand on us when he has plans for our future. A good pov here.