The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
Just Beautiful! And I write this with streams of tears flowing from my eyes. Beautiful things do this to me, and your words were so encouraging and peaceful to an Earthling who lives in our chaotic world today. Yes, peace like a river...Very well written, very creative and I loved every emotion it took from me. Great Job
09/11/06
I started reading this entry a little reluctant because I thought I was in for a scholarly, dry teaching. But it turned out to be descriptive, thoughtful, and deep. Only one little quibble: "Every running, ever moving" - probably a typo - should be 'Ever running'. Such a minor point. Good work.