The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice twist at the end, and great use of the scripturs you chose!
I thought I was all cried out, as I had just finished reading two emotional entries back to back - but here I am crying again! This is just beautiful! I can't think of words to express the beauty I see and read in this story..."Step In". Fantastic read, fantastic writing...I loved it. Great job, God Bless.
Yes, this was beautiful. I had an inkling heaven was the home you were talking about. Not sure what gave it away. Beautiful view of death - how we dread it, and yet such glory beyond.