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08/24/06
A fantastic read; I loved it.
08/24/06
Absolutely lovely and a very unique perspective. What a wonderous "Cross"; it has power and anointing to transform hearts,chiseled from wood two-thousand years later. Blessings Brenda
08/24/06
Oh, he just needed a little nudge back! What a breathtaking account though! I loved the way the pastor said he didn't have to believe but that he himself believed in the talent he possesed. So very well written!
08/26/06
What I like - your style of writing is terrific! Very good dialogue - I felt I could see them together. It wasn't stilted and sounded real. Good opening too.

What I might change - you probably saw it - You forgot the quotes around Cancer.:) Otherwise, very nice!!
08/28/06
I like this--someone else this week had us experience the cross as a blind person, and similarly, you have us experience it primarily through the sense of feel. Very moving.
Using the Cross to bring him back - well done. I really enjoyed reading this.
08/28/06
Beautiful story! Such a tender and moving story of how God reveals Himself to us at the point of our understanding. You're a wonderful story-teller ... I always look forward to reading your work! :)

Love,
Jan
08/29/06
So beautiful! You took us through this experience as though we held the carving knife! Good stuff!
08/29/06
Goosebumps, Rita - that's what you gave me!What wonderful characterization and language. You do an amazing job of describing his transformation as he carves. What a beautiful and compelling story!!
08/31/06
Amen and amen. Such power of healing, mentally, physically, and emotionally is found in the cross.

Thank you for sharing. I would love to see this piece expanded.