The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a cute article. I enjoyed reading it. HOwever, I did notice that you switched back and forth from third person to first person, which can be confusing for the reader. Other than that, it was a good read.
A most enjoyable read. I burst out laughing at the end. It was really funny.
Interesting and cute. I was waiting for more drama but enjoyed it nonetheless. Nicely done.