The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
This would make a nice devotional. Well done. :)
08/05/06
Beautiful piece of poetry. I really enjoyed this; however, the lack of ANY punctuation, even a period at the end, made it seem cold, distant, and unhinged to reality somehow. Oh yes, one comma in the first line after He said, - but no quotes. Perhaps that is this writer's style or trademark; but it doesn't take away from the fact that this poem is very good and has a great message. Thanks. Nicely done.
08/08/06
This poem should be out in the world for the unsaved to read. Hope you will do that soon. Your work is NOT finished.
08/09/06
Lovely poem and excellent message - great job! Congrats, also, on your Davey!