The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/06
I like this. Your voice emits a passion necessary for your content. Well done. Thank you for the reminder and encouragement!
07/17/06
Your 9th and 10th paragraphs spoke volumes with very few words. Well done.
07/20/06
It would help clarity if you were to put quotation marks around "less is more" when it is used as an adjective describing an attitude for example. Maybe a personal connection with your reader would draw him in even more - personal annecdote or the like. You made some thoughtful questions.
02/21/08
I love the last line -- because it is so powerfully true! Thank you.