The Official Writing Challenge
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06/24/06
I wanted so much more of this! I wanted to know the time, and more about the setting, and much, much more about this little girl. So you've done a great job, in making your readers want more, more, more! One minor tense slip (...the only church she has known), easily fixed. I love this.
06/25/06
Life for this little eight year old girl was bittersweet...and your Readers got the message loud and clear in these few words. Short, brief and to the point. Beautifully done, and very well written. Kudos!
06/27/06
This is very soft and special, reminds me of my grandaughter decorating the cross at Easter. Thank you.
06/27/06
This expresses such tenderness in the middle of a harsh world and childlike faith; to receive and give. A breath of fresh air.
This is lovely. What a wise, sweet little girl. Good stuff.