The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/25
Well-done. You won't stay in the Intermediate category for very long!
04/10/25
I loved your story. It was very interesting and well written.
04/11/25
I like your pacing here, from a descriptive introduction, you have brought us into the depth of personal effectiveness - getting your message across without preaching. Well done.
04/17/25
Congrats on your placement!
This was wonderful to read.
Nicely done!
God Bless~
04/17/25
What a wonderfully told story! I agree, you won't be at this level for long. Well done!
07/02/25
Great story! I love the line; “Christ didn’t just save us from something—He saved us for something. Even in this tannery, I believe I’m serving Him.” Nice ending too - with the apprentice becoming a servant of the Lord too...
07/17/25
Wonderfully written story of a humble servant sharing Christ's love through his actions.