The Official Writing Challenge
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You pack a lot of Scriptures in a short word space. This is a nice outline for a sermon. I particularly like when you tell about your interpretation of a verse like women's places in church. It's thought-provoking and makes me stop and think. Instead of giving the definition of the topic word, especially as an opener, I'd urge you to pick one or two verses and expand on what they mean to you. Perhaps you could even give real-life examples. It can be hard to follow when you pack too many verses or jump around from one thought to the next without a clear transition. I can feel your passion in your words and I think you make some great points. You definitely wrote on topic too.
12/21/22
Beautiful job with bringing forward the message and Word in a powerful way.

I love entries packed with scriptures!

Merry Blessed Christmas
& Happy New Year

God bless~