The Official Writing Challenge
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Your life story is very compelling. And the content of this article is all valid and important.
If I can offer a bit of red ink:
It's just a bit all over the place.
What if you approached this as an essay:
Thesis statement, Introduction, Body, Conclusion?
And the Body contains 3 paragraphs with one story (example) to support your thesis statement?
Simply organizing your wonderful content would really elevate the impact

Blessings
10/17/21
I can relate to your story.

I agree to the sound advice above, still the message of commitment thus faithfully trusting God came through.

Thank you for your entry.

Keep writing.

10/17/21
Awesome testimony! Thank you!
Our God is able!
This is a wonderful testimony of day by day faithfulness. I liked the red ink advice- I'm going to use it too😂.
I hope you can fit more writing into your schedule-(after prayer and the Word) because this submission has a good ring about it. As if there is more to come.