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10/14/21
An encouraging and motivating testimony!
10/14/21
Great testimony. Your mother-in-law showed such a great degree of giving to others. A person who has a heart like that knows she will be rewarded by the Lord.

This piece has a good beginning and ending and it was well delivered.

Thank you and keep writing.
10/15/21
A beautiful heart-warming story.
This is a lovely, heartwarming story- and well written. Kudos!
10/15/21
This story is so lovely and a wonderful tribute to your mother. However, it is full of telling with almost no showing. Showing is what draws the reader in. Showing touches the reader's emotions. Cause the reader to smell the delicious food. Cause the reader to feel your mother's joy as she gives and gives. A good way to do this is to drop all passive verbs. It can be hard to learn, but so worth it! Happy Scribbling!
10/17/21
Oh, wow! Engaging and delightful story of service and faithfulness to God whom your righteous mother and faithful congregation of saints served.

Thank you so much!
10/17/21
Oh, wow! Engaging and delightful story of service and faithfulness to God whom your righteous mother and faithful congregation of saints served.

Thank you so much!