The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the subtlety of the reference of God's faithfulness encompassed in the sun rising and setting - Great images here.
Blessings
Some great images. Some excitement and good movement...I could see the many miracles of day to day happenings!

I'm always looking at my punctuation in my own poetry...you may consider reviewing this too. I wasn't always sure how to pause or stop for breathe.
Wonderful work.
I felt as I read the uplift of the Spirit.
I believe it takes a ride on His heights to capture these words- and you have.
Kudos
This is quite lovely. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.