The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a talent for writing poetry. I liked it and couldn't see anything that would improve it :)
This is quite lovely. I'm a bit tone deaf so struggle hearing rhythm, but it seemed good most of the time to my poor ears. You have a great message and did a nice job writing on topic.
08/04/21
Ypu wrote:
"Rise above to kneel"
I found that especially profound.

Well done.