The Official Writing Challenge
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Your testimony is refreshing. I want to give a big “amen” to the message. Well done.
07/17/21
Your entry was a very refreshing read. And your message, even a true story at that, rings true for all of us. It is the years I spent as a secretary and legal assistant that the look of a document is most important. To that end, I would gently suggest you only use the usual double spacing instead of multiple spaces between paragraphs. There was one punctuation correction. But it doesn't negate your fine entry. Just something I always notice, no matter who is submitting the entry. Good job!
This is a sweet story. I love how you showed God plans can differ from ours and turn out more wonderful than we could ever imagine. Be aware of starting common nouns with capital letters. Words like monarch butterfly, loggerhead turtles, registered nurse, state hospital should all start with a lowercase letter. RN and LPN can be tricky because the abbreviations are capped, but not the words. If the words are part of an official name, then you'd cap it: Community Hospital serves locals, but: There is a community hospital nearby. I think you did a fine job of writing on topic, delivering a clear message, and including relevant Scripture.
07/20/21
07/20/21
Thank you for your well written entry. I appreciate the message and also your testimony.
Thank you for listening to God's call on your life.