The Official Writing Challenge
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07/08/21
I really liked your entry. It ran smoothly; however, in stanzas 6 and 7, I found the tempo changing a bit and I found it to be a bit distracting. Other than that, you speak the truth and I enjoyed it very much. God bless!
07/14/21
I really liked your poem. Well written!
This is really lovely. I can feel your passion.