The Official Writing Challenge
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07/08/21
Your entry would make a great devotional. I certainly agree that God does provide us with so many good things. In your first paragraph, I think a couple of your sentences could have started out with He instead of God. It seemed redundant to me, but overall, I found your entry meeting the challenge word.
07/09/21
The scriptures you have chosen aptly illustrate God's goodness and His never-ending love for us. You could perhaps consider breaking the long paragraphs into shorter sections to improve the "readability" of your article. Your article carries a strong message!
You make some great points. This would be nice for a Bible study (note Bible should be capped because it's the name of a book). I'd think it could be more powerful if broken down to one Scripture and then expound on what it means and give examples of how that verse impacted your life. Be careful about using universal we or you. It's possible that someone reading this might not yet know God is good. I can feel your calling to spread the news of God. Keep writing, you're doing great.