The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/21
I thoroughly enjoyed your entry. I do have a couple suggestions though. This may be a personal preference, but I believe that when we refer to Jesus as our Savior, we should capitalize it. Down into the text, you state "hoped" where the word should be hopped. In fact, punctuation wise, I believe a good grammar/punctuation tool should be used, if you aren't using one. I can't live without mine. I think you had a very strong message in this entry and were spot-on when it comes to meeting the criteria of the word challenge. I enjoyed this read very much.
04/30/21
You wrote 'Jonah in response to God’s request'

Might better flow as 'In response to God’s request, Jonah'

It helps to read your entry out loud to see how it flows.

Your article was great in content, however punctuation and grammar need some polishing.

There are writing lessons under in the forums under Jan and Ann's sub title.

It's ironic that you wrote about this specific topic 'cause yesterday I was a real piece of work. At one point I became so frustrated, I asked God to please bring someone across my path to pray for because a side eye glance from anyone could have been the catalyst to me acting a fool...

Haha God has a wonderful sense of humor-He honored my request and I calmed down and shared a prayer and some Jesus love!
I really like your title. It's a great reminder and something pretty much everyone can relate to. Sometimes in live, we get too busy keeping score. Thankfully, that is God's job. I can't imagine how weary and overwhelming it would be to have to do such a thing. Jesus commands us to feed his sheep, not judge them. That can be hard to do in this world. This would be great for a Bible study or discussion group.