The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/21
I can relate to the business of life. Our lives are complicated and our choices are not easy. I noticed in your submission that you try to fit too much into sentences. Try to fit one complete thought into a sentence. Sentences can be short, long, compound, and complex. Usually, I have an idea for a paragraph and then develop sentences to support the paragraph.
This is a nice testimony and a great message.