The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/21
Thank you, keep writing.
You imagined yourself there. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
04/15/21
I liked the creative POV on this article very much. My suggestion is to replace all the passive verbs with active and the story would really sizzle!
04/18/21
I liked how you presented this guards perspective...I'm not sure I ever heard that before. Thank you!