The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/21
I found this to be a good example of how we, perhaps too often, find excuses not to pursue our God given talents. Thank you for sharing, and perhaps another edit before sumbitting.
A good explanation. Well done.
04/15/21
This story has SO much potential! You put a whole new slant on the disobedient servant. I would suggest you put the reader inside the servant's head. Let the reader see his reasoning. Let the reader feel his fear. His unbelief. Fill the reader with emotion as this person was filled with fear. Emotion always grabs and keeps reader attention!