The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/20
This is beautiful and so well written.I could feel the desolation and then the triumph of the final stanza. I am sure this will place, and rightfully so.
09/04/20
Beautiful!
This is a powerful piece, so full of emotion and genuine feelings. Even today many people can relate to these sisters. The Bible shows unconditional love, now we as modern day Christians Ina broken world need to spread the news of that wondrous love and your poem does just that.
09/07/20
My heart was aching for you until I realized who you were actually writing about. Good job!
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