The Official Writing Challenge
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very nice rhythm. some stanzas could break it up into easier bite size chunks though. The poem has substance.
The poem would break into couplets with good effect. I would, however, rather see four line stanzas, anything to help us step back and really discern the meaning of the poem
06/09/19
It's great that in the end, our questions will no longer matter. I love your line about tears flowing with answers!
Love Love Love - I can hear this "slammed" on stage! Well done!
This is a lovely piece. There's so much passion in those words. Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.