The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/16
I had to smile as I read this because our church sent of a group of teens to camp this week. Good writing, and a great analogy. We should all be firecracker Christians. God bless.
06/17/16
That was a creative way of explaining a truth to the young people. Para. 9 was a little mixed up. I think perhaps in your editing that happened. The last para. was long. It could have been broken up for easier reading.
06/19/16
I had never heard this analogy before but know it will appeal to children and adults alike.

In the story you changed from past tense to present tense in the line: These little gems make [made] ...

I think the last paragraph needs to broken down into smaller paragraphs, but overall it was a shining example of a well done devotional.
06/22/16
Great message!

Blessings~
06/23/16
Congrats!

Blessings~
06/25/16
Congratulations on 2nd Place, Level 2.
Congratulations. I enjoyed your illustration. A well deserved result.