The Official Writing Challenge
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Good start to a story. I felt it ended short. Reasons to why people become homeless is always puzzling.
08/03/05
Thank you for sharing this story with us. Regardless, if this is fictional, I know that even the best of us can find ourselves walking miles in someone elses shoes. Very, very, nice entry. (one of my favorites!) Beautifully written. God bless ya, littlelight
08/07/05
A very well written story. A good lesson, that without Jesus, the rest doesn't matter.