The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful, sad; yet, a little hopeful. I would separate your paragraphs. It was a little hard to read. Nice job.
08/03/05
I agree, this was excellent entry. If the paragraphs were (double) spaced, it would have been easier to read. Thank you for sharing. God bless, littlelight
08/06/05
Great entry! You capture her conflicted emotions well. Keep up the good work.
08/07/05
Good story. Some work separating paragraphs would make it excellent.
08/07/05
A touching story - but I'm not sure I could have handled watching the tape. That took a brave woman Space the paragraphs for an easier read.
Powerful story and compelling read.
08/08/05
Oh, what a touching piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.