The Official Writing Challenge
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Great last line! I think we could all ask ourselves that question. Where IS our heart? I liked the opening with all the things that your mother stockpiles. It made me smile, you did well here. ^_^
05/08/08
A delightful story with a very good moral within. It could use some editing for spelling and grammar, and perhaps tighten it up a bit...but practice makes perfect! So keep at it - I enjoyed the lesson, and it made me do some thinking: too much "Stuff" litters my house, also. So, thanks for sharing this lesson with us. Good job.