The Official Writing Challenge
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What a collection of memories! It gave me goosebumps when I got to the end thinking of the mother/daughter and how the daughter hopes that someday her own daughter will see that she did the best with what she had. So much memories put into here. A bit sad and happy almost at the end. Nice job. ^_^
05/08/08
Nice thoughts about your mom or "Mother"...as you sometimes called her. My only suggestion would be to break up your story in paragraphs with space between them - to make it an "easy read" for your readers. Otherwise, nicely done. Good job.