The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
You have some great images here. Very visual. Keep writing!
11/25/07
I really liked this...like stream of consciousness. I like feeling inside his mind as he's getting ready. I think there are too many commas in the 4th section about the desk. Love the end. Can almost hear "crucify!"
Nicely done -- you have hit upon thoughts and feelings. The nervousness of a trial sermon.
Nicely done -- you have hit upon thoughts and feelings. The nervousness of a trial sermon.
Nicely done -- you have hit upon thoughts and feelings. The nervousness of a trial sermon.