The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
08/22/07
You have written an article with some very good points. A little polish with grammar and structure can have your entry in tip top shape! Many people fail to listen to the good advice in the scriptures on each of the points you wrote about, but how much better would our world be if we'd only heed His words! You did a good job writing your heart's prayer for the world.