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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Angry (08/02/07)
I'm tired of an angry world.I'm tired of people forgetting they aren't the only ones.
Since when did God ever promise the world would be trouble free?Angry is the world with no God. They see only their own reflection looking back. They don't notice the excited child beside them who is seeing the moon for the first time. They are too busy looking for someone to blame their troubles on. No one has time to slow down long enough to hear a child laugh. They have to hurry and get off to work and the almighty dollar.
Accidents are no longer accidents to be laughed off. It's someone else's fault and they should pay....more almighty dollars. Angry world without forgiveness.
Angry is the world with no God. Foul language is okay, sexual over tones alright, but say a prayer out loud and your going to have a fight.
They claim to be a tolerent world, a world who loves all.Politically correct so they say. No one wants to offend You can be gay, or any other religion, you can love trees or animals, this can be your mission. You can tell everyone all about it, no ones scorns the details, but God forbid you love the Lord and talk about it aloud. Then everyone is angry because you've overstepped your bounds.Now what happened to the tolerence that everyone else is shown? No one wants to hear about God and love. The angry world is tired. They don't realize if they'd give God their anger they could have joy even when things are rough.Angry is the world.
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c clemons
08/12/07
You sound angry. Even the way the article is written is in an angry fashion. Try putting two spaces after the periods and space between paragrahs for an easier read. Good thoughts, keep writing.
Dee Yoder
08/22/07
You make some good points. You were well able to express your viewpoint in your article in a clear way. Check out how some of the other articles are spaced, and your articles will be easier to read in the next Challenge! Keep writing for the Challeges!