The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
Neat little story, pretty well told. A tense shift, and a couple of minor errors but this one carries a strong message.
Faith inspiring. It is worth perfecting. I've been there and get emotional to read a story like this one. Keep at the inspirational writing.
07/15/07
God is always right on time! He is faithful and loving when we need Him the most. Good story. :)