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05/02/05
BEAUTIFUL!!!!
This article touched my heart. Christmas means the same thing to me. You really connected. Don't change a thing. Publish today somewhere. Keep writing and I will definitely keep reading. P.K.
I think what I see here the most is the reminder that Christmas is about sharing and love. When we get older, the kids are gone, we often find that we are alone and while the phone calls come, it's not the same. I think it is at this moment, like the poem says, we need to find a new way to love and share.
Thank you for sharing what is truly important: family, love, reminiscing and most of all, our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. This was beautifully worded and its impact was powerful. Beautifully done.
05/07/05
Lovely poem. The great feeling of Christmas shared with loved ones comes across and touches the hearts of those who feel exactly the same.