The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/06
Good truth written here. What I would suggest is you leave off the exclamation marks and let the reader do that in his or her own head. If you say they shouted...then use one...as they become a distraction.
04/30/06
I'll echo the previous comment about exclamation points (they are rarely necessary; let your strong word choices do that work)--and I'll add that I admire your courage and your honest testimony. Be blessed and encouraged.