The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/06
Good attention-grabber at the beginning...certainly got me thinking! The last half might be edited and trimmed a bit, to retain the same sparkle as the beginning. And, paragraph spacing, please!
03/03/06
You needed to leave a blank line between paragraphs. We can see that you did work in paragraphs, but they didn't come across in your text. It would help the readability a lot. Be sure to hit preview before you submit, so you can see if something like that is going to happen.