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I enjoyed the article very much. It touched me deeply. Many times we ask for help for the big things but God is more than willing to help with even the tiniest things. The article showed God's mercy, forgiveness and His never ending willingness to help.

You showed very clearly how God helps when we ask him to. I know that it teaching us a lesson, but I think it needs to make people "feel" something too. Very often when we ask God for help, when we have tried so many things that haven't worked, there is a sense of desperation which you also need to convey.