The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/26
Your story brought back many memories and smiles. I also remember spending hours playing with wooden clothes pins (not the ones with springs). They could be made into cute little dolls, etc.
You definitely made me smile. My mom was positive everyone could sew--until she tried to teach me. The one red ink I might offer would be to make the dialog a bit more authentic. Don't be afraid to use slang, incomplete sentences, anything real people use in speech--I appreciated that double negative; it sounded real. You did a fantastic job of writing on topic and delivered a powerful message. And you definitely made me smile and chuckle.