The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/23
You have some great points here, which may need to be focused into separate verses to help us go with your flow more easily.
These are great lines. Poetry isn't my strongest genre by any means but this made me smile. At times it felt a bit disconnected. Making good transitions is one of the judge's criteria. You did nail another criterion--writing on topic, and I also think this had a clear message. I look forward to reading more of your work. You have a nice foundation. I'd challenge you to read and comment on every entry in this level and at least three in each of the other two levels. Keep writing and reading as much as you can! Good job.