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You made a good point that peace is a piece of God's armor. It's always good to get scripture out to the public, but your message to me got lost in all the scripture references. I understand the need for definitions, but some people would be insulted by it. Keep writing.
I really enjoyed the part about Covid. You could have made it even more central to the topic by showing how people disagreed causing the opposite of peace and how not just one shot was enough of a piece of the puzzle to beat it. People needed several shots and boosters. A sad fact that someone told me when I started is people will skip over articles that start with Scripture. It's sad, but definitely true. Instead, I'd urge you to pull the reader in with the Covid dilemma then introduce just one or two verses that make your point. It feels less overwhelming, especially to new Christians. And if you just focus on one or two verses, you can really expand on the meaning and give examples of how it fits into today's world. You did a great job of writing on topic. You also really know the Bible and I can feel your passion to spread that word to others too. Keep writing.
02/27/23
Yes, the world cannot give us peace.
Your title really drew me in - That analogy alone is rich enough for it's own article.
I also love your title! It is crazy that so many of us have the same reaction to use less scripture, I hesitate to even echo the sentiment. But I do see the point. My husband is a preacher and I often remind him to narrow down to one point. Your title is a great point. The rest of this could be three more articles. Hone in on one strong thought next time. That being said, I loved to see the scripture and your discussion of it!