The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely free-verse poem. I don't know all the rules of poetry but it seemed to flow nicely to my ear. The repetition of the word cabin felt like a bit much for me, almost like you were trying to make it fit the topic instead of it being on topic naturally. But that's just my opinion and others might feel differently. You have a beautiful message in this inspired piece and I can feel the passion in your words.
09/21/22
Nicely done, heartfelt and powerful.
God Bless~
09/22/22
Congrats!
God Bless~