The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/22
A reminder that indeed He gave us a new heart and a new mind.

A red ink. A while back I pressed the submit button before spacing the paragraphs.

Keep writing.
01/13/22
Very clear content, and a couple more para breaks will give it even more impact.
Good work.
01/14/22
Great message. A suggestion to make it pop even more would be to add some clear examples, from your own life or the lives of others to inspire the reader into practical application of your message.
01/16/22
Great message!
Blessings~
You make some great points in this devotion. I like that you started with a Bible verse. Unfortunately many will skip the verse or reading altogether if they see a verse at the beginning. If that happened, your first paragraph wouldn't make sense, so you should state the what the new beginning is right off. Also remember to cap books of Bible and put them in quotes and site from which version you are quoting. You did a fine job of writing on topic in a typical way while delivering a relevant message. With a bit of tweaking and maybe a prayer, you could enter this as a devotional in many places, including FW devotions.