The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 322 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Your article would go well in a devotional. I read it as encouraging, urging us on. And sound.
I wonder if your word count allowed could you end the discourse with the ‘how to’ have faith. For years I would grit my teeth and try to grow the faith of our Scriptural heroes- and felt so deeply deficient. I needed a devotional like yours but also the assurance that in His faithfulness it was not a burden of work. I could leave the need of faith with Him, turn and fall in love with His loveliness. I need to do this daily. My faith/ faithfulness grows from hearing His Word in His Presence.. I believe your article would set hearts on fire with Agape love and devoted faithfulness to Him and His works.
10/16/21
Great topic. However, the hook is weak. By opening with, "We all know," the reader could simply move on to the next entry because ... well... he already knows! Start with a challenging question! Use less scripture references and develop your own experiences and interpretation of faith. Use your own testimony. People love to read a good testimony! Happy scribbling!