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TITLE: The Beautiful One Who Is Not Beautiful | Previous Challenge Entry
By Janice Aylor
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I got him to say, “Alice, how about comin’ over to my place so we can hang out? I can order takeout for dinner and later we can make out in the shower. That’s hot, isn’t it?”
I hoped Alice would not need much encouragement to go along with Richard’s erotic adventure of sensual delights. Richard had been attracted to Alice since the first time they met as she was helping golfers get ready to play their eighteen holes.
Alice said, “I comin’ for dinner. I want to get to know you better. I’m goin’ to save myself for my future husband. You probably think I’m bein’ corny, but I’m not.”
Richard scowled. “Don’t know why you have to play hard to get. How about comin’ over ‘bout eight?”
Alice said, “Yeah, I’ll be there. See how things go.”
Richard replied, “I work out at the gym four days a week. I want to ‘press somebody.” Richard looked at her and winked while admiring her womanly curves.
There was only one problem. Alice had been saved at the age of nine, and I would have to maneuver this playful encounter so Alice would not chicken out when the time came. I had to get her to feel she must go to bed with Richard.
Later that day…
Alice was getting dressed and making sure everything was perfect. I disguised my intentions and let her think Richard really wanted her. I let her think about Richard and how good it would be to spend time with him. I caused her to daydream about what was coming and how enticing it was going to be. I wanted her to imagine every move, every action, and all of the wonderful feelings she was sure to have.
I did not want her to think about what might happen as a result of her frolicking and pleasure. Things such as disease, conceiving a child, the shame she was sure to feel after the deed was done were things I could not allow her to dwell on. I kept up all the thoughts of pleasure until I was sure she was ready to give in.
That night, she and Richard had a wonderful dinner. Alice had thoughts of the Lord and the fact that He wanted her to stay pure until the day she wed. God allowed her to think of all the bad things that could happen, things that could never be undone. He jarred her out of the daydreams and showed her the awful reality of what she was thinking of doing.
She said to Richard, “I can’t go through with this. I like you a lot. But I’m not ready to make out with you. I’m going to leave now.”
Richard was furious. “How can you do this to me? Everybody does it! Why do you want to be difficult? Don’t you know you are breaking my heart?”
“I’m just not ready. I won’t be ready until my wedding night!”
Alice stormed out and ran to her car, never looking back. She unlocked the door and climbed in, turning the key and driving away. Soon she was home.
I walked away from Alice that night. As I limped along the street outside Alice’s place, my clubbed feet shuffled as I made my way into the outskirts of the city. There were plenty others I could convince with my form of heavenly light, carefully disguising my club feet. There will always be others…
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The message came across clearly. Thank you, keep writing.
I liked your idea however initially thought it was another human being who was setting Alice up. Perhaps one of her associates.
The club feet addition was a great wrap up.