The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/21
Great story, and all the better for being true - for it reeks of authenticity. Well done.
I agree with Noel. The vividness, springing from personal experience, definitely brought this to life for the reader, at least this one anyway.
08/22/21
Great storytelling.

Including your testimony was icing on a delicuous word cake.
You did an outstanding job on this. The first person worked really well. You did a great job of building suspense too. Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level. Happy Dance.