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I enjoyed reading what you wrote. It has a great message and is well written. There is just one typo (answered instead of answer). Organising your article into paragraphs would make it easier to read. Apart, from that, I couldn't see anything that would improve what you've written :)
08/01/21
I do not know if this is fiction, but through your afflictions God can reveal himself to others who needs to experience God. It might sound trivial, but only God knows the person’s heart, thoughts, and mind.

'Soon, my thoughts were less on my afflictions and more on Jesus.' The sentence I take home with me.
Thank you and keep writing.
This is an awesome story. Having dealt with chronic pain for over 30 years I could really relate. I don't think you need that first paragraph. You speak in general, using first person plural (we), but the story is Mosaic of MY Life. I think your story tells all of those points far better than that first paragraph. Your story is full of Hope and touched my heart and made me smile!
08/04/21
You wrote a very encouraging piece of art as you wove pain into purpose and Glory.

Well done.
I could relate to your story. My husband has foot-drop,caused when he had a knee replacement and the surgeon hit a nerve by mistake. My husband falls a lot and has to wear a leg brace. I love the way you constructed your entry, showing your weakness but ultimately your strength as you relied more on the Lord Jesus and found peace. Very inspirational story. Kudos!