The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/21
I like how you have opened up some imaginative details to let us in on the story. Biblical fiction is my favorite genre, but it can fail if we let the truth of the stories take second place to how we tell them, but I think you've made a good start here.
04/18/21
Thank you for this insightful article, well done. Keep writing.
04/22/21
The main purpose of our life I believe, is to share the truth of God's word with others. You have done that very well here. Something I need to remember not just in the prosperous times, but even when and especially when it does not look or feel so good. Thank you.
You did a nice job of retelling the story and getting in the MC's head. Your message was clear and you nailed the topic.
04/24/21
This is really nicely written. A few suggestions for tweaking:
SHOW the woman's apprehension at Elijah's request. Get into her head and show her thoughts. SHOW her shock when she opens the full barrel. Show the revelation that God gave her that he always provides!