The Official Writing Challenge
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What a neat take on space! You've given such a vivid picture with your words. I don't know much about poetry, but I can certainly appreciate beautiful words such as yours.
I loved this: particularly the first 3 stanza's. This is an artist's poem, looking out through His eye's on the beauty of his creation. I felt the ending could have been stronger, but it did not detract from the strong central theme at its heart. God bless.