The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/21
I found the huge block of print with no breaks intimidating. Good content, however.
02/11/21
I agree that the content is GOOD, very good. But, shorter paragraphs would make for easier reading.
04/08/21
I agree with the other contents: Good contents. However, I have a few suggestions to make this story pop.
1. Short, catchy title
2. Draw the reader in - in your case, challenge the reader with a question.
3. Many people on this site are familiar with Bible stories. Rather than simply reiterate the story, give it a twist. Get a clear POV. Use the widow's POV or even the son's. Show their reactions to the prophet's request. Show the incredulity, the questions, etc. Hook the reader through emotion.
4. conclude with the irrefutable fact that God always DOES come through for his people - through history and today.
5. Keep scribbling and God Bless!