The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/21
This is one of my very favorite stories. I would have preferred you to use the English rather than the Jewish names.
Certainly it is an impressive story of God always providing enough.
You did a great job of retelling this. You could probably tighten it a bit and just focus on the beginning as it's a lot for one story, but I understand how your passion for spreading the Word is so great. Nicely done.