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You have an enjoyable writing style, and you maintained my interest to the end.

The only improvement I can see is that there should be a line in front of this sentence to separate it from the paragraph above (a small thing!)

I believe that Satan is a world-class stalker; he is looking for those of us who are not connected. A man should not, nor was he ever intended to live a solitary life.
I think you did a fine job of expressing your opinion, showing evidence of it and leaving the reader with much about which to think. A minor note is your voice switched from We to I to you. For me personally, I feel it's most powerful when you use first person singular throughout (Although I've no doubt others will disagree). It makes me feel like you're having an intimate discussion with me. And while none of these switches is incorrect per se, for me it can change the tone a bit. Overall though, I think you've delivered a powerful message and covered the topic nicely. This could be an awesome Bible study or devotion. I especially like the notion of Satan as a stalker. It's quite brilliant and evokes powerful emotions from such a short sentence and a perfect lead into the next about living a solitary life. You've given me much to ponder. Outstanding.